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    dots Submission Name: Choicesdots
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    Author: enigmaticone
    ASL Info:    22/m/nh
    Elite Ratio:    2.94 - 16/36/23
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 111
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 562



    Description:
       Just something I whipped up after reading someone elses poems and it made me think about the subject


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    dotsChoicesdots
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    Another bridge travesed
    Another path left behind
    The choices that we drag behind
    Are chains around our feet
    The undertow pulls us further underneath
    Overwhelming vigorously
    To smother with its blistering cold
    And entomb us in its grip
    As the clouds can lift us up
    To see the glimmering stars
    And pull with us our highest hopes
    To touch the sky
    And breathe crisp air
    If the cards all fall in place
    Force your hand or lay it down
    The future starts post-haste




    Submitted on 2007-11-29 01:23:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Oh my god! This is superb.

    The only negative comment I have is that it ends rather abruptly. I don't know if it's only me, but I think the ending is one of the most important aspects of a poem.

    All the same, it's all a matter of personal opinion, and I happen to LOVE this poem!

    Great, great piece.

    -Ethan
    | Posted on 2007-11-29 00:00:00 | by Inkybro | [ Reply to This ]



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