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Janitor


Author: Inkybro
ASL Info:    17/M/Oklahoma
Elite Ratio:    3.33 - 55 /69 /39
Words: 25
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
Total Views: 1015
Average Vote:    5.0000
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Description:




Janitor



It seems I've become
The little janitor
With his broom
And his mop
Always everywhere
Sweeping your mess
Mopping your footprints
And sweating
For you




Submitted on 2007-11-29 13:50:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  It seems as though you want pity.

Bliss.
| Posted on 2007-11-30 00:00:00 | by emoxday | [ Reply to This ]
  Don’t forget to take care of yourself. Also remember sometimes the hardest thing to do is simple to watch.
People need to learn they can indeed learn without you and sometimes they can handle it on there own.
| Posted on 2007-11-29 00:00:00 | by snufthepunk28 | [ Reply to This ]


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