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    dots Submission Name: YOU DON'T GIVE A SHIT!!!!!!dots
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    Author: chaos_flame
    ASL Info:    24/m/ky
    Elite Ratio:    2.77 - 46/79/25
    Words: 214
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
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    dotsYOU DON'T GIVE A SHIT!!!!!!dots
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    Here my life goes again straight down the drain

    Wanted so much not to have this pain

    At least this time, I'm not the one at blame

    I don't have to hold my head in shame

    I want to be happy and stay that way

    To be able to live life for a day

    I guess its just my never ending fate

    To be consumed by tears and hate

    To see this world in a different light

    Instead of seeing it only at night

    If only you could see how much I hold inside

    Everything that makes me run and hide

    See you're happy you got your man

    All of it went according to plan

    You say you're sorry but thats a fucking lie

    Like you said "If I lost you I would die"

    I hear nothing now in your voice

    And yet you say "you had no choice"

    It didn't matter about our son

    You just wanted it to be over and done

    Why didn't you just stab me in the heart?

    Instead of ripping it out and tearing it apart!

    Oh wait, thats right, you don't give a shit!




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    ||| Comments |||
      wow...thats harsh...im sorry that happened to you. maybe it was what needed to happen for things to be revealed to you...hopefully the child will be put first in this situation. Doesn't it suck how our best poems come from our most raw emotions like hate, hurt, and love?
    | Posted on 2008-04-19 00:00:00 | by alma-perdida | [ Reply to This ]
      This is really much more of a "rant" than a poem. I don't think I could personally consider a piece like this to be "poetry."
    | Posted on 2007-12-05 00:00:00 | by gavinspikenard | [ Reply to This ]
      I would've thought this piece to be something I've read before, something everyone has at least experienced.

    Well, I was wrong, to some degree. When you throw in your child, and the woman is still dead set on throwing away your life...that hurts.

    I'm sorry for you loss, my friend, and for you being caught up with such an uncaring person. You nor your children should be witness to such acts.

    My thoughts go out to you.
    | Posted on 2007-11-30 00:00:00 | by SanctityExposed | [ Reply to This ]
      well thought rhymes for someone so justifiably angry :)
    | Posted on 2007-11-30 00:00:00 | by BahamutZer0 | [ Reply to This ]



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