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    dots Submission Name: Rememberdots
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    Author: BahamutZer0
    ASL Info:    22 / Male / Wi, USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.76 - 14/17/9
    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Nostalgia
    Total Views: 163
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 433



    Description:
       I was saying this to myself in my head, and I felt like I should write it down.


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    dotsRememberdots
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    Remember the times there, in which when you felt in good heart about everything.

    Remember when you said to yourself, you know this wont last, so id better savor it.

    And although we savor it to our most possible, we always look back on it

    And wish we could stay there

    Wrapped in it

    Walking along side it

    Realizing it forever and ever.




    Submitted on 2007-11-30 01:43:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i admire the simplisity i can never seem to graso it myself the thought conveyd well and it had nice flow good work
    | Posted on 2007-12-23 00:00:00 | by layDsayD | [ Reply to This ]
      Well for random thoughts, I certainly appreciate the depth. Thanks for posting this and sharing them...
    | Posted on 2007-12-05 00:00:00 | by gavinspikenard | [ Reply to This ]
      Powerful! It's always wonderful to see something so simple make such an impact on my mind. You are a talented writer, keep it up!
    | Posted on 2007-12-01 00:00:00 | by Sir Fusting | [ Reply to This ]
      very very short/simple...but i like it since the meaning is there and strong
    | Posted on 2007-11-30 00:00:00 | by iaida | [ Reply to This ]
      Your thoughts aren't yours alone, my friend. I find myself thinking the same thing all too often.

    Just being able to reminisce isn't good enough, I wish we had the ability to relive those moments again and again...

    Thanks for bringing those thoughts back into my mind.
    | Posted on 2007-11-30 00:00:00 | by SanctityExposed | [ Reply to This ]



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