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    dots Submission Name: Dear Kyledots
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    Author: CaughtRedhanded
    ASL Info:    18/F/TN
    Elite Ratio:    4.23 - 94/41/22
    Words: 266
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
    Total Views: 636
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       This is VERY VERY VERY old... this was written in the middle end of Kyle's and my relationship...


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    dotsDear Kyledots
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    Dear Kyle,

    I love you more today than:

    the first phone call you gave me (Kyle:Um, hey it's Kyle... from myspace.)

    the day you asked me to be you girlfriend(honestly... I just want to hear you ask me agian to make sure I wasn't dreaming)

    the first show we went to together (Foxys rocks)

    the first time we held hands


    the first kiss you gave me (you made my ears HOT)


    the first time we went out with your family(awkward)


    the first time we went out with my family(embarrassing)


    the first time we cuddled


    the first time we watched a scary movie together

    the first time I pwned you at Poke'mon Stadium (It won't be the last)


    the first time we found out you could fit in my jeans (you really did have a nice bum in them)


    and the first time those 3 small words passed threw our lips (Kyle? How do you feel about me?)



    I love you more than anyone and anything ever... yes even more than Inyasha!


    our promise rings could break!


    our friends could disapprove = (


    even worse our parents could DISAPPROVE =''''''''(


    and we could get into huge fights that last 10 minutes (gosh those suck!)


    but as long as these feelings I have for you stay with me,


    I'm NEVER leaveing, and I'm NEVER letting you go.

    love, Brittany<3<3<3





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