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Everytime It Rains

Author: CaughtRedhanded
ASL Info:    18/F/TN
Elite Ratio:    4.23 - 94 /41 /22
Words: 110
Class/Type: Poetry /BrokenHeart
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Average Vote:    4.0000
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Everytime It Rains

Every time it rains I listen to the
And wonder what's so great about
Everybody lives and everybody
And no one is ever gonna love you like
I did.

When it got dark
I didn't need a match.
I never needed light to see you.
You always thought I disappeared
But I was always here.

Every time it rains,
I know it's good to be alive.
Every time it rains,
I know I'm just trying to survive.

Take it as it comes
And take me as I am...

Every time it rains

I can't help but hate you alittle more inside...

Submitted on 2007-11-30 09:22:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I really liked how you ended so bitter.

| Posted on 2007-12-01 00:00:00 | by AnotherNobody | [ Reply to This ]

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