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    dots Submission Name: Everytime It Rainsdots
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    Author: CaughtRedhanded
    ASL Info:    18/F/TN
    Elite Ratio:    4.23 - 94/41/22
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Poetry/BrokenHeart
    Total Views: 769
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotsEverytime It Rainsdots
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    Every time it rains I listen to the
    sky,
    And wonder what's so great about
    sunshine.
    Everybody lives and everybody
    dies,
    And no one is ever gonna love you like
    I did.

    When it got dark
    I didn't need a match.
    I never needed light to see you.
    You always thought I disappeared
    But I was always here.

    Every time it rains,
    I know it's good to be alive.
    Every time it rains,
    I know I'm just trying to survive.

    Take it as it comes
    And take me as I am...

    Every time it rains

    I can't help but hate you alittle more inside...




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      I really liked how you ended so bitter.

    Correy
    | Posted on 2007-12-01 00:00:00 | by AnotherNobody | [ Reply to This ]


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