Everytime It Rains

Author: CaughtRedhanded ASL Info:    18/F/TN Elite Ratio:    4.23 - 94 /41 /22 Words: 110

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Everytime It Rains

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Every time it rains I listen to the sky, And wonder what's so great about sunshine. Everybody lives and everybody dies, And no one is ever gonna love you like I did. When it got dark I didn't need a match. I never needed light to see you. You always thought I disappeared But I was always here. Every time it rains, I know it's good to be alive. Every time it rains, I know I'm just trying to survive. Take it as it comes And take me as I am... Every time it rains I can't help but hate you alittle more inside...

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I really liked how you ended so bitter. Correy

| Posted on 2007-12-01 00:00:00 | by AnotherNobody | [ Reply to This ]

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