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    dots Submission Name: Intimidationdots
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    Author: Inkybro
    ASL Info:    17/M/Oklahoma
    Elite Ratio:    3.33 - 55/69/39
    Words: 35
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 136
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 242



    Description:
       About a girl I am a bit intimidated by.


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    dotsIntimidationdots
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    Now you, little lady
    Your voice
    Your face
    Your smile
    Your gaze
    Why is it that
    I can't say
    How I feel
    I admit it
    I confess
    It's a little hard
    To talk to you




    Submitted on 2007-11-30 13:40:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Haha, at of all your pity-wanting poems(I admit it I've just read one) I like this one. It's short, it's cute and you get the point across without rambling. The only problem I would say would punctuation but who cares about that. Nice piece.
    | Posted on 2007-11-30 00:00:00 | by emoxday | [ Reply to This ]



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