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    dots Submission Name: Solid Grounddots
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    Author: Mr.Ordinary
    ASL Info:    21/M/Navy
    Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 64/102/41
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       another one of my quick write on whats on my mind


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    dotsSolid Grounddots
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    lost in a world that i call my head
    i took everything for granted in my life
    but now im heading back towards solid ground
    i dont where ill land
    but at least it will be somewhere
    out of the stormy sky

    ill do this even if its the last
    last that is before i die
    ill keep myself by my side
    once i land back on solid ground




    Submitted on 2007-11-30 13:40:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Here's to planting our feet on solid ground. Moving expression of thought & feeling. Many thanks for sharing.
    | Posted on 2013-01-26 00:00:00 | by CrypticBard | [ Reply to This ]


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