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    dots Submission Name: Wisdom of Timedots
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    Author: 7makaveli
    Elite Ratio:    3.37 - 36/42/47
    Words: 182
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       This is a continuation on my previous piece "Philosophy of Time", you should check it out as it may enhance your experience. Anyway, this was one of those in the mood feelings, where words just came, I'm sure you can relate...


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    dotsWisdom of Timedots
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    It's all been done before, sound familiar?
    I've been here and there at the same instance,
    But for once I'm settled in this hemisphere,
    I cannot be replaced once I settle in this state,
    I keep my observers guessing and my weapon of choice near,
    My arms broaden back and forth but my heart remains in the present,
    It's a gift I give to those who've learned their lessons,
    I wrestle with screams that echo throughout my body, their impact I cannot lessen,
    I've captured many dark moments, to them I would like to shed light, but my speed is infinitely slower in its presence,
    But nothing is like the feeling of when you look beyond my appearance and see the potential,
    This foresight is absolutely detrimental to the essential virtue of patience,
    Keep giving me your hopes and dreams as I work my magic with my fingers,
    You must know that the possibility of success in its own subtle way lingers,
    Now follow the summary of guidelines upon which my gasp ranges,
    Simply believe through all perceptions that life changes...




    Submitted on 2007-11-30 21:55:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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