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    dots Submission Name: Lostdots
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    Author: Max Million
    ASL Info:    16/M/DRA
    Elite Ratio:    2.58 - 30/51/66
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 146
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 651



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    A lost love, missed because of fate.
    I had the chance, but a greater love had come, had taken me.
    I'm sorry, he's not better but I truly care for him.
    But just remember, there will always be that part of me that loves you back.
    There will always be that part of me that regrets letting you go.


    This lost love is an understanding love.
    You understood, and that was the key.
    I felt horrid for letting you go, for hurting you.
    But just remember...


    There will always be that part.
    Partagez les mots de l'amour, parce que ils sont à nous.




    Submitted on 2007-11-30 23:26:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This poem is really good. Wow...I have to say it is defiantly an amazing poem. It was very heartfelt and I could feel the pain as I read it. haha I know I sound lame.
    | Posted on 2008-02-08 00:00:00 | by Zyiera | [ Reply to This ]
      Max i was wondering if i could use this poem for the book me and brittany are doing. pwease!!!! cuz this poem is really good plus it is about aaron.
    | Posted on 2007-12-08 00:00:00 | by PrincessOfDark | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow.I really like this poem. And...even tough you did...kinda hurt me...I forgive you. Don't put yoursle fdown because of me. I Love you and nothing can change that but you love that guy more.
    | Posted on 2007-12-01 00:00:00 | by PrinceOfEvil666 | [ Reply to This ]


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