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    dots Submission Name: Just Medots
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    Author: D_lovely88
    ASL Info:    19/F/Florida
    Elite Ratio:    0.01 - 0/0/5
    Words: 80
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsJust Medots
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    I'm goofy,
    clumsy,
    loud,
    And proud
    To be who I am.

    I'm smart,
    sophisticated,
    shy,
    I'm not gonna lie.

    I'm scared,
    confused,
    nervous,
    And anygry
    About how you played me.

    I'm not just another girl on the street
    Someone you just so happened to meet

    I'm unique,
    deep,
    And compasionate.
    But most of all
    I'm me.
    You just have to see
    That I am who I am
    And not who you want me to be.




    Submitted on 2007-12-01 12:52:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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