i like how the words really paint a picture in your mind such as:
the moon and its perfect silken sheen
its almost as if you could place your self with in the writing... i dont know if that makes any sence but it did in my mind.
i got the feeling that the women you are talking about is hard to understand by the way it would talk about good memories and then how you lost her, but your still keeping hope that maybe she will come back or maybe still think of you...
im not sure, just telling you what i got out of it.
i love the words you use and how perfectly they fit together. i cant wait to read the next one.