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    dots Submission Name: Sourt At No... (Loved But Still...)dots
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    Author: PrinceOfEvil666
    ASL Info:    16/M/tx
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 4/5/7
    Words: 49
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 878
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsSourt At No... (Loved But Still...)dots
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    I am Loved
    By the one I love
    But still I wonder
    what would it be like
    If that other person wasn't here
    Would we be happy together
    Would he love me?

    I think he would
    I hope he would
    I am Sure he Would

    But still...




    Submitted on 2007-12-01 18:06:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Tis True, he would.
    | Posted on 2007-12-03 00:00:00 | by Max Million | [ Reply to This ]


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