Sourt At No... (Loved But Still...) by PrinceOfEvil666

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Submission Name: Sourt At No... (Loved But Still...) dots

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Author:	PrinceOfEvil666
ASL Info:	16/M/tx
Elite Ratio:	2.65 - 4/5/7
Words:	49

Class/Type:	Poetry/Love
Total Views:	884
Average Vote:	5.0000
Bytes:	303

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Sourt At No... (Loved But Still...) dots

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I am Loved
By the one I love
But still I wonder
what would it be like
If that other person wasn't here
Would we be happy together
Would he love me?

I think he would
I hope he would
I am Sure he Would

But still...

Submitted on 2007-12-01 18:06:12 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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Tis True, he would.
| Posted on 2007-12-03 00:00:00 | by Max Million | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.