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Submission Name:
Sourt At No... (Loved But Still...)
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Author:
PrinceOfEvil666
ASL Info:
16/M/tx
Elite Ratio:
2.65 - 4/5/7
Words:
49
Class/Type:
Poetry/Love
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Sourt At No... (Loved But Still...)
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I am Loved
By the one I love
But still I wonder
what would it be like
If that other person wasn't here
Would we be happy together
Would he love me?
I think he would
I hope he would
I am Sure he Would
But still...
Submitted on 2007-12-01 18:06:12
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Tis True, he would.
| Posted on 2007-12-03 00:00:00 | by
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