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    dots Submission Name: Embrace #2dots
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    Author: ThisIsReal
    ASL Info:    22-M-Lost
    Elite Ratio:    4.27 - 182/194/88
    Words: 148
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 189
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 901



    Description:
       Much more expanded than #1 and far from done, but getting there, it almost says everything i plan on putting into it, but we shall see.


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    dotsEmbrace #2dots
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    I could kiss your breath away
    yet not breathe without your smile
    I could leave you without a word to say
    and still melt when you whisper my name
    I could make you cry a million tears
    each with your head on my shoulder
    yet you will never be sad
    I could set your very skin ablaze
    with the slightest of my touch
    but posess the strength to defend against all
    I could, with the flick of my tongue
    in the secret of our night
    take you to the heights of passion
    I could make love to you by candlelight
    well into the next day's dawn
    only to sleep the new day away
    embracing you
    I could make each day your paradise
    leaving you without want
    if you can embrace me
    I could make all mentioned here
    become the beggining to forever
    if only we can embrace love




    Submitted on 2007-12-02 05:51:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Very nice piece! I understand all that you are saying and the piece flowed beautifully! I think it is great I'd give critique but there is obviously none needed!
    | Posted on 2007-12-16 00:00:00 | by aNNmARIE | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey Bro...This poem bassically describes love..I love it...It really sets the mood from the begining..I love that. Much better then the first one.
    | Posted on 2007-12-09 00:00:00 | by Bloodlust86 | [ Reply to This ]



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