From the Honest Depths of My Heart on November 22 by Lotte Noir

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Submission Name: From the Honest Depths of My Heart on November 22 dots

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Author:	Lotte Noir
ASL Info:	17/F/Seat F8
Elite Ratio:	6 - 10/7/5
Words:	144

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
Total Views:	76
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	906

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We were supposed to write a villanelle over Thanksgiving break for my English class. I hadn't eaten any real food (as in solid food) for a few days becuase I had my wisdom teeth taken out that Monday. Clearly the effect was not positive.

From the Honest Depths of My Heart on November 22 dots

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I’m haunted by this desire to chew,
I’ve concluded today–Thanksgiving day.
Curse the turkey leg I can only view!

Oh, for my mouth’s crisp, crunchy rendezvous
With the apple that is not a puree.
I’m haunted by this desire to chew.

Even the homeless in a long food queue
Would not pick up this pile of grey.
Curse the turkey leg I can only view!

I will hold my breath until I am blue.
But how could that ever truly convey–
I’m haunted by this desire to chew.

This gruel’s loathsome carrionistic hue
Inspires my heart’s and tongue’s sad decay.
Curse the turkey leg I can only view!

Though I may suck down this mystery brew,
Beware: I will soon continue to bray.
I’m haunted by this desire to chew.
Curse the turkey leg I can only view!

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i wont even attempt to critique, lmao; miss lotte, this is my fav grief/anguish poem ever. becauseyou're my hero, mr white will laugh REALLY hard and give you an A+. I would. It's the thought that matters most ;) plus valium could have added some strange effects too... heeheeee. but you can eat nuts now! woowhooot!
| Posted on 2007-12-07 00:00:00 | by Maevity | [ Reply to This ]

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