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    dots Submission Name: Sphinx: Remote Control c. by ruejacobs 12/3/07 1AMdots
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    Author: ruejacobs
    ASL Info:    37/feminazi/Gehenna
    Elite Ratio:    4.78 - 489/401/144
    Words: 221
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    dotsSphinx: Remote Control c. by ruejacobs 12/3/07 1AMdots
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    A cat may look at a king
    Does this disturb you?
    Your face is an unreadable scrawl to me
    There’s no rosetta stone at hand
    To decipher the glyphs of your intent


    Hey, I’ve heard tale of your attic
    From those more familiar than i
    It’s said
    there’s a storehouse of artifacts there
    That you have lost track of your dolls
    How once you own a thing
    You will keep it inside its box
    And never let it out


    Well, my original packaging
    peeled away long ago
    And I’m no collector’s edition
    You can stuff and mount me all you like
    And I will still reform


    Baby, I’m an old hand at this sort of game
    The shelf has long been my home
    I know my place, do you know yours?
    Keep pushing those buttons, then
    And see where it gets you


    What labels you offer are meaningless
    You speak of hollowness like
    It’s something to be feared
    I’ve forever been a ka statue
    I do not function without being filled
    And I contain your energy now


    Go on, entomb yourself, Tut
    No matter how high you stack that pyramid
    You cannot travel without your ka
    Tell me, who is collected now:
    The pharaoh, or the cat?




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