Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • ES Magazine
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • Video Tutorials
  • RolePlay
  • 90% off Amazon
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: To Touch His Dirtdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: informations
    ASL Info:    24/F
    Elite Ratio:    2.84 - 22/20/25
    Words: 125
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 296
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 702



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsTo Touch His Dirtdots
    -------------------------------------------


    If he were the sky
    I would be the earth
    Because he loves to fly
    And I love to search

    If I were the trees
    He would be the sea
    Because I love the breeze
    And he loves me

    If he were here right now
    And I could tell him anything
    I would tell him that I love him
    And that I feel I have lost him

    Not to a different woman this time
    To something I can not compare with
    Something that he thinks sets his mind free
    But in reality, it blocks his view - he can not see

    If I were the sky
    And he were the earth
    I would want to fly down
    To touch his dirt




    Submitted on 2007-12-03 16:35:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      is it drugs that are blocking his view?? that's what i got out of it. good thing you were trying to be supportive in this write rather than turning your back on him. i can feel the hurt from the fact that you had lost him to another girl before, even though that wasn't the case this time. fun to read and hopeful.
    </3 lisa
    | Posted on 2008-02-18 00:00:00 | by 777sacrites777 | [ Reply to This ]
      Great expression here. Excellent job of conveying the personal feelings of affection into something other-wordly.
    | Posted on 2007-12-05 00:00:00 | by gavinspikenard | [ Reply to This ]



    Full Anime Episodes Streaming Free
    5 million youtube videos all rated over 4.7 stars with 40+ ratings

    [ Copy this | Start New | Full Size ]

    Google
     

    [ Chrispian ] [ Write Forum ]
    [ Friends ] [ SNESroms ] .
    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry
    This user has been inactive for more than 5 days.