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    dots Submission Name: Treedots

    Author: annie smith
    ASL Info:    20/f
    Elite Ratio:    5.26 - 75/61/24
    Words: 469
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
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       its kinda like Snow. i hope you all like it!

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    A small, small seed among many seeds
    Fights off the rodents and the large weeds
    A seed that fell from the tall, tall tree
    Its branches long, its stance mighty.

    The seed grows
    Even as the wind blows.
    It grows strong in the dim light
    Wondering when it will be an easier fight.

    The sapling grows
    Despite what nature throws.
    It will soon be powerful and mighty
    Like its parent tree so large and free.

    As the years go by
    The tree grows to the sky.
    Up, up, up so very high
    While other saplings die.

    But not I said the tree
    As it longs to be free
    Free and big like its parent tree
    I will not die, not die, not die. O no! not me!

    A few years later, when the tree was taller,
    Near the tree came an animal some called a faller.
    The little tree gave this new kind of animal a kind welcome
    But no kind answer was to come

    The animal pierced that beautiful skin
    That the parent tree had, like a hated sin
    Both trees cried in agonized pain
    As the tree lost its mighty reign

    With passion burning deep with in,
    The little tree grew strong with in its skin
    It promised to revenge what was done to his parent
    And the little tree thought that what it had to do was so transparent.

    So in many years
    When the fallers came with their leers.
    The little tree wasn’t some small
    It had grown free and tall

    The fallers tried to pierce its skin
    But the saw would not begin.
    The little tree became so tough
    That nothing could be sharp enough.

    Angry at that tall, tall tree
    The fallers picked up a saw as loud as can be
    And they started to fall
    That tree so tall.

    But that tall, tall tree
    Was as strong as could be
    It wouldn’t fall
    Not for the tall, nor the small

    But, alas, the saw was too sharp
    Cut through the tree like a knife on a harp
    But the tree wouldn’t surrender
    And in one last attempt, the tree in all its splender.


    On the faller

    So the faller fell
    (like he should)
    For wellers well
    And bellers bell.
    And tellers tell.

    And as the tall, tall tree died
    It looked closely by its side
    And saw a new sapling from its seeds
    Fighting amongst its dreary weeds

    And that new little sapling found the strength
    With in its old parent tree big length
    And made a promise to get revenge
    No matter how hard it would be to avenge!

    And the faller will fall once more.

    Submitted on 2007-12-03 22:14:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Not too sure about that phrase/last line. Feller fall thing. Kind of too forceful. Kind of gave more of a tone of "I dont have much too creative to say but this sounds cool even if it only sounds cool in my distorted mind" But the rest wasnt all that bad.

    Sorry. Just started to feel like something forced after the first feller fell thing.

    But thanks for sharing though.

    | Posted on 2007-12-03 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]

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