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    dots Submission Name: Don't you know dots
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    Author: mekisha4ever
    ASL Info:    39yespleaseNV.
    Elite Ratio:    1.58 - 38/36/47
    Words: 102
    Class/Type: Poetry/Romance
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    dotsDon't you know dots
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    Don't you know that my heart is in your hands

    Don't you know that I give you all that I am

    Don't you know that you give me hope for life

    Don't you know that when you go I cry

    Don't you know that you have all I ever need

    Don't you know were you are is were I want to be

    Don't you know every thing you do is right

    Don't you know with every day and every night

    Don't you know your love gives me flight




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      Very original ans skillfully written. You have a good style of writing.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2009-07-10 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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