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    dots Submission Name: Don't you know dots

    Author: mekisha4ever
    ASL Info:    39yespleaseNV.
    Elite Ratio:    1.58 - 38/36/47
    Words: 102
    Class/Type: Poetry/Romance
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    dotsDon't you know dots

    Don't you know that my heart is in your hands

    Don't you know that I give you all that I am

    Don't you know that you give me hope for life

    Don't you know that when you go I cry

    Don't you know that you have all I ever need

    Don't you know were you are is were I want to be

    Don't you know every thing you do is right

    Don't you know with every day and every night

    Don't you know your love gives me flight

    Submitted on 2007-12-03 22:55:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Very original ans skillfully written. You have a good style of writing.

    | Posted on 2009-07-10 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]

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