I really like this poem; you really get your point across; apparently to well because you have offended some people from what I see looking at the comments below. But hey that’s what it's all about right getting your point across to the point that it makes people get really angry or really happy that’s how you know your doing you job. These poems are the ones I like the best, the kind that offended...
I can see were your coming from. Sex is what MOST boys want and they will do what they have to, to get it.
Note: I said MOST... I don't want any hate mail from you ignorant people who skim over comments.
My favorite part of this poem would have to be,
"They will keep coming back
All to keep you confused
Wrapped around his finger
A temporary muse"
It just rolls off my tongue when I read it, it makes me smile! Great Job.
But I do feel you could go back and edit this poem a little more.
SPELLING
&
PUCTUATION
Girl get on it... and I think this poem will be even better than it already is
Hope this will help and I that I hear from you very soon
Britt
no offense, but i could say the same about you
good job getting your feelings down, but please dont attribute the sins of the few to the potential faults of the many
Submission Name: Ex Boyfriends
but not all guys are like that.