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    dots Submission Name: Hard to forgetdots
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    Author: Broken-lands
    ASL Info:    13/female/here
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 22/34/32
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 96
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       Just something that came to my mind a few minutes ago xD


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    dotsHard to forgetdots
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    It's so hard to get rid of you,
    you're just glued somewhere
    in my thoughts.
    I guess it's my fault,
    since it was me who started it all.

    It's almost as if you were a flea,
    and my blood, my scent, my mind
    and my life were some kind of animal.

    I cannot understand why it is so hard,
    it's not love I can tell.
    Yet, it is hard.

    ~




    Submitted on 2007-12-04 16:30:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      It is hard to forget someone you love. I love the way you use the sense as if they are a part of you. This is a well written piece and I am looking forward to reading more of your works.
    | Posted on 2007-12-06 00:00:00 | by poet09 | [ Reply to This ]
      Well written once again. In this one the flow was much better. You are a very good young poet. I remember the tender age of twelve, discovering boys and all the feelings that come with them. I know how you feel with this, it'll be easy after a while. As for the poem, it was great, emotion portayed very well. Keep up the awesome work, and I'll keep reading

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    | Posted on 2007-12-04 00:00:00 | by MinervaBlu | [ Reply to This ]
      I understand the feelings that you are having. They can be real tough to deal with. Uncertain why someone sticks in your mind for a reason you dont know and how it hurts so much to get rid of them. Good piece. I like it. Short and to the point.


    enigmaticone
    | Posted on 2007-12-04 00:00:00 | by enigmaticone | [ Reply to This ]



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