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    dots Submission Name: So Fakedots
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    Author: enigmaticone
    ASL Info:    22/m/nh
    Elite Ratio:    2.94 - 16/36/23
    Words: 155
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
    Total Views: 131
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 924



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       I FUCKING HATE FAKE PEOPLE!!!!!


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    dotsSo Fakedots
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    A broken mask you hide behind
    Not shielding your demons
    Your scars, your plights
    A shattered vision of what could have been
    A lonely life that starts to spin
    Cut my skin with shards of broken hearts
    Your not what I thought you could be
    Or what you try to be
    So fake
    So fake
    A sweaty palm with which you reach
    Air is all you find
    I wont pull you out any more
    So damn fake
    A traitor to yourself
    A black hole behind your mask
    To dismember whoever reaches out
    To see the monster that is sheltered
    You are so ugly inside
    Wash away the grime that your life became
    And crush the shell of sorrow
    When the mask is not a part of you
    Is the day that I will grab your hand
    And pull you to safety
    I refuse to save a monster
    That is just out to destroy me




    Submitted on 2007-12-04 18:23:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This was written very well, though the flow wasa little off. I loved the wording it made the emotion easier to see. I know how you feel. My mother is like this and my ex-best friend. I hate clay figures. Keep up the awesome work, and I'll keep reading

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    | Posted on 2007-12-04 00:00:00 | by MinervaBlu | [ Reply to This ]



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