So Fake -------------------------------------------
A broken mask you hide behind
Not shielding your demons
Your scars, your plights
A shattered vision of what could have been
A lonely life that starts to spin
Cut my skin with shards of broken hearts
Your not what I thought you could be
Or what you try to be
So fake
So fake
A sweaty palm with which you reach
Air is all you find
I wont pull you out any more
So damn fake
A traitor to yourself
A black hole behind your mask
To dismember whoever reaches out
To see the monster that is sheltered
You are so ugly inside
Wash away the grime that your life became
And crush the shell of sorrow
When the mask is not a part of you
Is the day that I will grab your hand
And pull you to safety
I refuse to save a monster
That is just out to destroy me
This was written very well, though the flow wasa little off. I loved the wording it made the emotion easier to see. I know how you feel. My mother is like this and my ex-best friend. I hate clay figures. Keep up the awesome work, and I'll keep reading