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Submission Name: magnanimity dots

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Author:	WD
ASL Info:	44/M/Fl
Elite Ratio:	3.19 - 7/7/20
Words:	28

Class/Type:	Deep Thought/Friendship
Total Views:	144
Average Vote:	5.0000
Bytes:	170

Description:

magnanimity dots

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When she speaks
I listen to her

When she walks
I walk by her

When she sleeps
I dream with her

Submitted on 2007-12-04 19:51:10 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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Short,simple, abstract, but with alot of feeling. With a few simple words you said all you needed to say. Keep up the nice work, and I'll keep reading

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| Posted on 2007-12-04 00:00:00 | by MinervaBlu | [ Reply to This ]

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