This write I really like
It is so true when something bringsd us down we always have tommorow or the future to look forward to
I am a Strong Believer in the fact that we create our own happiness
As I always say its all in how we perceive a situation
We have to find the Positive to the negatives weighing us down
Once we find those positives they will lead us to happiness
I Thank You for sharing this
Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
At first read I thought this piece one about nature. Yet, on second read I thought perhaps it the tale of someone sinning then repenting to find him/herself alone in a new beginning. Then dying(in second stanza) with the crematory ashes scattered about with the hope of resurrection at the appointed time.
nice job on drawing parallels between the seed, the sun, and life. I think you could go even more minimalist on this to great effect.
What if you took out all the abstract images and just let the reader make those connections on his own?
A fallen leaf
Each raindrop a painful cleansing
This bent flower alone in a field
This seed, scattered and blown, shall bloom
This dying sun shall rise again.