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    dots Submission Name: only witnessdots
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    Author: pioneerheart
    Elite Ratio:    4.6 - 190/178/112
    Words: 151
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
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    In this day the pain is fresh as blood of doves she fed to me.

    we spent a month talking about you
    and now, I pretty much forgot you

    yes, it's so strange
    the things I'd do for the moment

    he left me in a way that could haunt anyone

    took me away to be his one and only, long, lost friend
    neither of us, see the world better

    there's no such thing as forever

    only sickness only listless only witness
































































    Submitted on 2007-12-05 09:41:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      You did a very good job in describing your emotions on a relationship perfectly
    Some of us lose that little feeling of Love we believe we shared with someone
    When the relationship lasts awhile it always seems to get weaker and weaker as time goes on What one truly has to do is create a stronger Love and a new meaning to the Love they share with someone to make it last forever
    Excellent Work!!
    Looking forward to reading more from you in the future
    God Bless
    Ron
    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    Ron

    | Posted on 2007-12-05 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]



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