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    dots Submission Name: True Lovedots
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    Author: Inducted_Kitty
    Elite Ratio:    4.3 - 307/422/109
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsTrue Lovedots
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    Oh, the beauty of your smile!
    So sad to take away from the sunset -
    Boasting glorious shades and hues.
    But, the sheer radiance of life
    In every crease of your face
    In the very scent of your skin
    Makes me weep with joy.

    Oh, to be you! With all of your power!
    To turn darkness to light!
    Your mere presence of being!
    The magic of you is infectious -
    It spreads to all of those that you touch!
    I thank God each and every day
    My heart is afire with my love.




    Submitted on 2007-12-05 14:54:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      hey kitty.
    it seems an age since ive seen you.
    i hope you are well.

    this piece shows such promise.
    promise of an attempt at happily ever after which is so beautiful considering the tragedies life has thrown your way over recent years.
    you deserve some happiness
    | Posted on 2007-12-06 00:00:00 | by Someones Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]


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