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    dots Submission Name: Who are you to say?dots
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    Author: SinCeer05
    ASL Info:    21mVA
    Elite Ratio:    3.27 - 243/279/168
    Words: 645
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 183
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 3918



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       This was written for a topical tournament...Topic was 30 min before a guys execution by lethal injection..


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    dotsWho are you to say?dots
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    As the hour of the justification of my aspirations draws near to resolve an commence…

    I express the purification of lost souls by pain and suffering to the fullest extent…



    With a smile

    -----

    Now confined-to-imprisonment, for the labor and drive to bring demise-to-the-innocent

    Turn the table, inmy eyes-their-the-dividends, a bonus to externalize our time-of-deliverance



    Absurd to the nervous, society inept not to see and learn from my service

    The devils militia,

    I was a rebel a killa,

    Devotion to surface with firmness, no level is realla, I worked wit a purpose



    Life an man in a vault, no smoke signals and keys except for contraband to invoke

    Enhanced to repose, revelations spoken bluntly I was controlled to expand on a cult



    Those in a fate of poverty, I saw their need for a taste of honesty

    Truth doesn’t weigh against a change in karma’s lead

    I opened their souls to see that the vain can be a philosophy like Socrates



    {at the podium before his arrest}

    ”Theirs no dismay in a corpse,

    its obvious we all agree cuz I’ve put no chains on the doors

    We commune as one with no parlay to endorse,

    With archaic traits we resume to behave on a course

    With no question or risk
    divine has no structure, Thy fathers have betrayed an the lesson is this

    Follow me my equals, life has a sequel and blessed is it”

    *Cheers And Applause*

    ”For centuries, left an right hemispheres have been home for an enemy

    But I speak to renege on God’s promise that we can save all of the entities

    You’re here now!

    the suspense is heaved as you lay witness to sacrifice one of life’s energies”



    *Chanting begins*

    {Bound an tied man is dragged an then hoisted unto the high rise}



    “A sacrifice before the worthy, those who can give back, we claim to be earthly
    As he first bleeds, I present to you to see, feel the power an end ya searching,

    The Bible and its curse reads”



    “Give, and it shall be given to you.

    For whatever measure you deal out to others,

    it will be dealt to you in return.”



    “The blasphemy lives in your poverty, eating the last of your crumbs
    you followed a blurry map with every facet to love

    Let us not relive the past cuz its done

    This is not the People Temple or the Family of Manson

    I lay siege new thoughts to promote exuberances expansion”

    *Chanting rises to shake the platform where the sacrificial Father/preacher lies”

    ”The hypocrisy of Catholic commandments,

    Breathes down your sons neck an nape,
    life is the pits and we must respect the gates”

    {Platform is lowered unto the crowd}

    *One screams, hundreds roar as fists meet reality and justification



    {In court, one year before the Death by lethal injection takes place)


    {The Judge in final closings}

    ”Once in doubt, I now realize human potential,
    the catalyst for actions to that delve deep unto ones mental.

    you reserve your right as resentful

    may you find hell as proof of concern.

    I have nothing to do but sentence what you did unto others

    Will be dealt to you in return”




    Submitted on 2007-12-06 02:30:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      The subject and delivery was well done. It's approach felt accurate and true to it's source. But some of the wording is off-putting.
    | Posted on 2007-12-06 00:00:00 | by gavinspikenard | [ Reply to This ]



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