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    dots Submission Name: Could we go higherdots
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    Author: Soldier O_Tears
    ASL Info:    18/M/INDONESIA
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 41/129/120
    Words: 261
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 742
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1628



    Description:
       I wanna take her as my friend in sad, happy and raising kids,is that wrong?


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    I sense a great despair come out of you
    Like an unmeasured ocean depth
    I see a reflection mirrored by you
    Like a widow suffer from debts

    A long distance view, so far to reach
    An Island of dream, such a sight I missed
    A skin so soft, tempting to be touched
    Yet in what manner i could manage the touch

    We've been together for ages
    In diferent ways,different friends
    Yet the itch still knows no end
    Tingling through veins off to hemorrhage

    Flood me with torment of temptation
    A simple yet dangerous passion
    Grows more tension, grows more lesion
    I need to put this on a discussion

    It needs a bit of handling hands
    Staring eyes and serious conversation
    About you and I or we should stand
    It needs a bit change of version

    How about a little elevation
    From a caring friend to a loving man
    From a helping hand to love action
    Feel no worry, cause this, is a certain plan

    We hold no secrets between
    We throw hate beyond fight
    You are the right one i could win
    I know better that you are my right

    You kept it for week just to decide
    I could not hold it the feelings i hide
    For you i will give the things that i pride

    Is it necessary to put love aside
    If you thought you're not the one
    Is it necessary changing our side
    If you thought you're not the one

    for me







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