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    dots Submission Name: The Pridedots
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    Author: SpartanSteve
    ASL Info:    20/m/texas
    Elite Ratio:    3.85 - 41/54/45
    Words: 50
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 83
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 358



    Description:
       The title refers t a pride of lions, just like how dolphins travel in pods and geese travel in gaggles.

    Enjoy, and feel free to rip it apart if necessary.


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    dotsThe Pridedots
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    A window to gaze.
    A window to gaze.
    And all things outside,
    Are roaring ablaze.
    They're all in the shelter.
    A sweltering box.
    Safe from the masses.
    But they're still in a box.

    And the teacher said,
    They were the perfect family,
    And they all had tremendous teeth.




    Submitted on 2007-12-06 11:05:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i'm not certain i understand the intention of this piece, but i like how it was put together, which really is a shame, because it means i'm either missing something good, or you are. either way, i enjoyed the piece and if nothing else, that's some indicator that it's a valuable contribution to the rapidly depleting wealth of poetry in the world.

    what did i just say you ask?

    if you figure it out, let me know.

    i'm curious too.
    | Posted on 2007-12-06 00:00:00 | by Sheakhan | [ Reply to This ]



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