gaeia's gift by lonely goth

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Submission Name: gaeia's gift dots

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Author:	lonely goth
ASL Info:	17/F/Coucil Idaho
Elite Ratio:	3.83 - 28/26/27
Words:	112

Class/Type:	Poetry/Love
Total Views:	94
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	697

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i wrote this a LONG time ago. its not one of my best but it'll do...i thought i was in love at the time. i hope you like it.

gaeia's gift dots

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a prayer in the nigt
a cry in the morning
this just isnt right
but this just isnt boring

you make my heart whole
you make me feel free
i think you've stole my soul
there's something between you and me

you make my knees week
and you make me believe
you are just what i need
in this hot summers eve

i just cant stand being away
it cruses my heart inside
and nw i know that someday
i wont have to hide

gaeia gave you to me
and i prey she wont take you away
cuz now i can see
you are forever
yesturday
and today.

Submitted on 2007-12-06 14:10:54 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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Yeh its definetely love. To have written a long time ago this is great. When you fall in love you don't tend to forget about that person as much as you try to. Anyways I hope that things work out for you and this person.

poet09
| Posted on 2007-12-07 00:00:00 | by poet09 | [ Reply to This ]

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