Description: this poem is a poem about the true reality of life....unless your perfect...no one really wants to hear what you have to say and im tired of it...id like to hear what you have to say about it.
The Road I Take -------------------------------------------
hating and debating
the road i shall take
hoping and waiting
praying the road will not be fake
so many questions
so many lies
too many decisions
way too many tries
every thought inside my head
every cry within my soul
leaves me wishing to be dead
to be burned at the stake of my totem pole
i fear the path that i have chose
will lead me the wrong way
i dont want to have to pose
for people to hear what i have to say
for i am tired of being wrong
and being punished for my mistakes
for i a mjust a girl of song
give me a break for fucking sakes
so next time you chose to yell at me
look into my eyes
and maybe you will finally see
that inside my sould there is nothing but cries
you make me hate myself
and i cannot stand that feeling
so please no more scolding
because my heart cant take anymore suffering.
you know kayla, this really sounds so familiar and it's very sad to say. often times this happens and people get so frustrated they just give up. i think you did a great job of expressing your feelings combined with the true/real life experiences you have. i like the frustrated angst in what you say and how you say it....."for i am tired of being wrong
and being punished for my mistakes
for i am just a girl of song
give me a break for [censored] sakes"
perhaps we are all gulity at times of being this way unawares, but perception is also very important. i just love this part ...
"you make me hate myself
and i cannot stand that feeling"...i too have felt this way, as many have, and it sux! bad people suck! LOL overall i love this, great work!!!
Submission Name: The Road I Take
