I want to shiver all over
and feel your finger tips down my skin
to press up against you
to feel your breath tickle my ear
my nose touches your cheek
our lips meet
I lose my shirt you lose your pants
I feel whole in your warmth
and alive with your touch
I get lost in your kiss
like an addicting drug
it makes me hot
it gets me high
you complete
me
Very passionate. This piece show how Ying and Yang make each other whole if I may say. A kiss can be such a powerful thing and have a effect on you that you can't describe. The imagery that this gives show that you are a superb writer and you know what you are doing.
Exceptional piece of art, keep it up and do what it is you do best.
Submission Name: Incompletely Completed
