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    dots Submission Name: stedfastriotpatrollbarrelrollofficerdots
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    Author: DBC
    ASL Info:    21/m/ar
    Elite Ratio:    2.77 - 55/59/29
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsstedfastriotpatrollbarrelrollofficerdots
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    i am watching humans
    taking notes
    proper greetings
    sordid jokes

    i too was one of them
    i walked some days in human skin
    i loved like a person can love
    i lived and breathed human

    i wined and dined human
    i drank the nights away human
    i slept the days away human
    until i slipped out of my head inhuman

    human until you realize
    every reaction
    every strand of moral fiber you posses
    is scripted and cued
    reused reused reused




    Submitted on 2007-12-07 04:34:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like this poem because I feel that it's true. We walk around doing what we think is right according to the rules of society that we just lose ourselves and become simple machines, copying only what we see is accepted.

    Thank you for sharing this.
    | Posted on 2008-01-01 00:00:00 | by Jakirina | [ Reply to This ]


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