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    dots Submission Name: Night drivedots
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    Author: Soldier O_Tears
    ASL Info:    18/M/INDONESIA
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 41/129/120
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsNight drivedots
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    We were driven into the night
    Guided by streetlamps and roadmarks
    Into the solitary road and curving hills
    Still there was fear i cannot hide

    Passing dogs and the moon that they barked
    Desert and shining light of nocturnal eyes
    The music roared so loud ,yet loneliness still covering
    Home still so far away




    Submitted on 2007-12-07 10:05:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      You took me there with words and I shivered in the aftermath. You have talent and I'm pleased to have had the opportunity to read this one. Keep writing! Sharon
    | Posted on 2007-12-07 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]


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