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    dots Submission Name: ALONEdots
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    Author: lonely goth
    ASL Info:    17/F/Coucil Idaho
    Elite Ratio:    3.83 - 28/26/27
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 163
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 615



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       this is about a broken heart and someone that could never except the love that someone was trying to give them....it true about a lot of things


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    dotsALONEdots
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    alone and sensless
    here in my room
    feeling broken and usesless
    hoping it will end all to soon

    a clowded mind and shattered heart
    is all i have anymore
    i know i said we've grown apart
    so why am i still so sore

    i want you now more than ever
    to hold me in you arms
    and tho my answer was always never
    it was because i was afraid of your charms

    so i hope you will forgive me
    and my raging mind
    and i pray you still believe
    for the fault was none but mine







    Submitted on 2007-12-07 13:17:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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