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    dots Submission Name: THE TRUE REALITYdots
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    Author: lonely goth
    ASL Info:    17/F/Coucil Idaho
    Elite Ratio:    3.83 - 28/26/27
    Words: 147
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 80
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    Description:
       this poem is about how people feel when they arent accepted for who they are....and what they look like or the things they do....its a harsh world and reality out there. its not fair....so i just decided to put my anger to use in this poem...i hope you like it...please comment on it!!!!!


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    dotsTHE TRUE REALITYdots
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    Followed by a ghost
    shattered by a dream
    i fear i am the host
    of this midnightmare scheme

    a stench of sweet revenge
    still lingered in the air
    and the hopes that this will end
    is all that i seem to care

    for my dreams haunt my every step
    and my thoughts torchure my mind
    i scream for someone to help
    and for someone to just understand

    for this nightmare i am dreaming
    is not a dream at all
    it is nothing but reality
    the truth behind my wall

    reality can be so cruel
    you have to be "in"
    you have to be perfect
    its almost like im in a duel
    with this vicious "intellect"

    i am not what they want
    nor am i what they seek
    but who really gives a fuck
    im not not fake nor am i weak!!!




    Submitted on 2007-12-07 14:03:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This write screams you have to be yourself to be truly happy in life and I have got to say I couldnt agree with you more
    So many times throughout life I would put up a false fascade but honestly I would never truly be Happy
    It wasnt until I realised who the True Ron is and starting being myself that I was finally truly Happy
    Excellent Job with this
    God Bless
    Ron
    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    Ron
    | Posted on 2007-12-13 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]


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