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    dots Submission Name: Always Theredots
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    Author: lonely goth
    ASL Info:    17/F/Coucil Idaho
    Elite Ratio:    3.83 - 28/26/27
    Words: 154
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
    Total Views: 103
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 976



    Description:
       this poem is about always being there for someone that you care about...it was written for a very good friend of mine that was going through a lot of trouble...please comment.


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    dotsAlways Theredots
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    what do you do
    when life goes astray
    do you just get up
    and walk away

    nobody knows
    whats gunna happen next
    its not like its ever
    written in a txt

    what life throws you way
    you have to work through
    each and every day
    its what we all have to do

    you may be in a rut
    but remember someones there
    so dont let that door shut
    my time is here to share

    listen to you heart
    and what it says to do
    its never to late
    for a fresh new start

    but promise one thing
    you'll always be true

    true to your soul
    true to your family
    true to yourSELF
    then you'll live happiy

    so when you need a helping hand
    remember im always there
    unlike the hour glass, and its sands of time
    im here to stay
    cuz your problem are mine




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      This was written very well. I liied it alot. It reminds me of how I am towards people. Nice to know there are others who still care. Keep up the great work, and I'll keep reading

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    | Posted on 2008-01-14 00:00:00 | by MinervaBlu | [ Reply to This ]


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