Description: this one is another one of my depressing suicide ones....idk...its just sad...i hope people understand it and get how i felt when i wrote this
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Her Suicide -------------------------------------------
The Knife she holds
is her dream come true
with it shes not always told
what she has to do
she does as she pleases
while its apon her wrist
and she prays that no one sees
how the scars turn and twist
the blood gives her hope
for a better tomarrow
and she hopes she wont have to cope
with this living in sorrow
so tonight she just might die
i guess its what she decides
and i know she wont regret
her own suicide
This was written very well. It flowed nicely and rhymed well. The only thing it the emotion wasn't very evident. Other than that, it was great. keep up the awesome work, and I'll keep reading
Submission Name: Her Suicide
