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    dots Submission Name: Were ever it takes medots
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    Author: mekisha4ever
    ASL Info:    39yespleaseNV.
    Elite Ratio:    1.58 - 38/36/47
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsWere ever it takes medots
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    my flesh needs sex &
    I go were ever it takes me
    my soul needs love &
    I go were ever it takes me
    my heart needs love &
    I go were ever it takes me
    I just need to give up on
    sex, love & soul
    I thought I did but my heart
    keeps getting involved
    when it is not welcome
    now it has a hold on me
    it just wont let me live without it.
    I'm not always happy with the outcome
    but still I go were ever it takes me




    Submitted on 2007-12-08 00:14:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Nice truth in this poem, It's all about finding a good balance I think, and knowing when to let which part of you lead.
    But I think this is a battle we all have.
    Nice!!
    | Posted on 2007-12-08 00:00:00 | by Instep | [ Reply to This ]


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