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    dots Submission Name: Ride of my lifedots
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    Author: sweetme16
    ASL Info:    18/f/who cares
    Elite Ratio:    2.21 - 108/251/162
    Words: 178
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 139
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 1029



    Description:
       i wrote this a few mins ago while sitting at home and listening to music. I was writng down song names and i just started writing and this is what i came up with. I'm graduating highschool in 6 months and this discribes how i feel.


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    dotsRide of my lifedots
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    It seems like I致e been waiting my whole life for this time to arrive
    I知 perched on the brink of my new adult life
    Looking back at all the years that have gone by
    Experiencing the next few carefree months that are all I have left
    Knowing that whatever the future holds will be a truly thrilling ride
    Having the knowledge that my teachers have given, the wisdom of my parents
    The confidence in my self that only comes from hardship and experience.
    Seeing all the love and support come pouring out
    I知 left speechless sometimes at the thought of all that I知 leaving behind
    Ready to charge forward in my new life
    Like a mighty Lion roaring as it gets ready to fight
    For fight is what I知 going to be doing for the next few years
    Fighting for my place in the world, my education, and the rest of my life
    I値l always remember what this school, this town and this world has taught me
    For if not for this place
    I wouldn稚 be me.




    Submitted on 2007-12-08 00:34:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Great job! I remember when I was about to graduate high school, and I remember thinking everything you wrote at one time or another during my senior year. Keep it up.
    | Posted on 2007-12-16 00:00:00 | by Sparkster | [ Reply to This ]
      This is beautiful, it feels like a speech your giving as a leader to inspire not only you, but those aroound you and it reads like your a very strong willed, complete and loving girl.
    I love it.

    Matt
    | Posted on 2007-12-08 00:00:00 | by forfila | [ Reply to This ]



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