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    dots Submission Name: WHYdots
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    Author: hollow inside
    Elite Ratio:    1.23 - 1/4/5
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Description:
       I still think of You


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    dotsWHYdots
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    You were gone so fast
    Not even a blink of an eye
    I wanted you by my side
    But you left just in time
    To see me fall and turn black inside
    I am at peace with my inner beast
    Still cant get you outta my mind
    But you left just in time
    You werent there to see me die

    WHY.........




    Submitted on 2007-12-08 12:11:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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