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    dots Submission Name: I could saydots

    Author: heartless_
    Elite Ratio:    2.46 - 284/251/154
    Words: 272
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsI could saydots

    I could say you hurt me,
    I could say your words cut.
    They cut deeper than a knife
    The blade so dull, made you dig harder.
    Every shot you took at me
    Went straight to my heart.

    I could say you broke me.
    I could say you made me stronger.
    I could lie and say it doesnít matter.
    I could say you were right.
    I could say you were wrong.

    I could say a whole load of stuff,
    But no matter what I say.
    It would not change the facts.
    It would not bring you back,
    It wouldnít make me want you back.

    I could say I miss you,
    I could say my lifeís empty with out you.
    I could say I donít understand,
    Say I just want to talk, just want to be friends
    I could basically lie right to your face.

    But we both know
    All that I could say would be a lie.
    Because you lied to me from the start.
    Did all that you said you wouldnít

    When it got to be too much,
    You had to cut me down.
    So you could feel like a man,
    Then say it was all my fault.

    I could say youíre an asshole
    I could say so much
    But it would only be a waste
    For I never want to see you again.

    All that I could say
    Dies on my lips as I realize
    Your not needed.
    Iím great with out you
    Iím happy without you
    Basically Iím better than ever
    Nothing left to hold me back.
    No more weakness left.

    Submitted on 2007-12-08 16:52:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow this brought tears to my eyes it was good it is just how I feel about my soon to be X-husband.
    | Posted on 2007-12-08 00:00:00 | by mekisha4ever | [ Reply to This ]

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