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Keep on Pretending

Author: Instep
Elite Ratio:    1.59 - 13 /5 /5
Words: 155
Class/Type: Lyrics /Serious
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Average Vote:    3.3333
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Keep on Pretending

A shadow rises, time to fight fires with fire, Make a girl cry? no, so now your a liar, this shit is getting way to twisted, I have listened to them bitch and moan over emotions when no one else had a problem, you took an excersize for something that it wasn't, a personal beef? Please, he don't even know your name, or are you just one of them shit stirrers, trying to fake us into a false move, if you don’t like C.S and C.S friends then stop reading this shit, Christ as my witness, we have true hearts for the business, true love for the cause, and light and strength to finish, Your slander is un affective and senseless, and your attempt for topic is borderline pathetic, There I said it, you want to be my friend? Lol, what a question, but its honest, or are you just going to keep on pretending.

Submitted on 2007-12-08 18:18:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  since i explained mine...explain urs? just when i thought i understood it..i was lost
| Posted on 2007-12-10 00:00:00 | by Aangskate | [ Reply to This ]
  I don't know what that was about? But it seems like you were pissed at someone?
Kelley Frost

Great write anyway
| Posted on 2007-12-10 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]
  I liked this - nice flow
| Posted on 2007-12-09 00:00:00 | by Innocencebroken | [ Reply to This ]

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