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    dots Submission Name: Winterdots
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    Author: Inkybro
    ASL Info:    17/M/Oklahoma
    Elite Ratio:    3.33 - 55/69/39
    Words: 69
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 66
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    dotsWinterdots
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    Winter's cold
    Snow is falling
    Ice is covering
    All that's green
    Kill it slowly
    Bring down branches
    Strangle bushes
    Bring down trees

    Winter's cold
    Snow is falling
    I don't mind
    The numbness now
    I seem happy
    When I'm alone
    And cabin fever
    Is what I love

    Winter's cold
    Snow is falling
    I don't mind
    This noose of cold
    And anyone
    That disagrees
    Just pretends
    They're happy now




    Submitted on 2007-12-09 09:37:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      never having experienced a winter so cold.. its hard for me to relate.. but i do like the last stanza....

    metaphorically read.. this poem is brilliant to me.
    keep it up.

    :)
    | Posted on 2007-12-09 00:00:00 | by Sanjhana | [ Reply to This ]
      Winter in Michigan is just starting and already I'm hibernating beneath warm, fleece sheets. I particularly like your lines, "Winter's cold
    Snow is falling
    I don't mind
    This noose of cold"
    I shall have to read more of your work as time permits.

    Stay warm, Sharon
    | Posted on 2007-12-09 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]



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