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    dots Submission Name: Crazy In Lovedots
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    Author: Katana Ryoko
    ASL Info:    17/F/Cali
    Elite Ratio:    2.86 - 483/428/109
    Words: 94
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       Thank God I don't feel like this anymore.


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    dotsCrazy In Lovedots
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    Haven't kissed you for a long time
    Been looking forward to your lips on mine
    The breathlessness takes me to another world
    Gets me to feeling like a different girl
    I'd do anything you want me to
    That's how crazy in love I am with you

    Haven't seen you for awhile now
    And I still find it amazing how
    The thought of you just brings me down
    How I wish you would come around
    Put a smile on my face the way you do
    Remind me why I'm crazy in love with you




    Submitted on 2007-12-09 11:57:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      What a beautiful write!! I love the courage you use with the honesty you give. Lovely
    | Posted on 2007-12-10 00:00:00 | by forfila | [ Reply to This ]


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