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Submission Name:
so so
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Author:
thewantedwords
ASL Info:
28 male sydney
Elite Ratio:
0.35 - 40/40/37
Words:
27
Class/Type:
Poetry/Serious
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65
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144
Description:
so so
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catch my smile feel my drift,
touch my heart so make it lift,
feel my lips playmy mind,
a freind in me is a friend to find.
Submitted on 2007-12-09 22:49:09
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Wonderful. Much better then the other one. But still the rhyming. Not all poetry is rhyme.
| Posted on 2007-12-10 00:00:00 | by
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i think its good, but i dont like the last line. but otherwise this is exceptional =]
| Posted on 2007-12-10 00:00:00 | by
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