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    dots Submission Name: I Godots
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    Author: CynicalxDreamer
    ASL Info:    31/m/7th Level of Hell
    Elite Ratio:    2.46 - 40/100/64
    Words: 114
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 1017
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       I often write things from the perspectives of characters I have played or are playing. Recently, a character I played base off some stereotypical ideas regarding Norse mythology and beliefs is faced with a situation where she is likely to die and be hunted down like a dog.

    So, as a momento to her legacy and her lineage...she wrote this upon her shield.


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    dotsI Godots
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    I go to do my duty
    I go to carry my shield
    I go to recite fallen names
    Before I go to join them

    I go to climb the broken hill
    I go to near the gallow's tree
    I go to face death
    Before I go to my own

    I go to brandish my hammer
    I go to carry honor
    I go to fulfill my office
    Before I go to leave it

    I go to die the Good Death
    I go to taste the blood
    I go to remember glory
    Before my name is forgotten

    I go
    I go
    I go
    I go to be a Valkyrie




    Submitted on 2007-12-10 04:40:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This was very nice to read--I do find Norse mythology fascinating, even though at times its baffling as well. this was exactly the kind of in your face statement that you would think to find on a shield, so that worked well. overall, I appreciate this kind of thing a lot!
    | Posted on 2007-12-10 00:00:00 | by marigold | [ Reply to This ]


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