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Your so far, so far and out of reach she turns and walks away i cry as i fall down to my knees and time drags its feet as the clock ticks on i'm further than i was before and i can't take this pain anymore they say everybody's gotta have a dream baby but my dream just walked out the door how can you rebuild the shattered pieces when you don't know what it's meant to look like in the first place i got a picture in my head of how it was meant to be but it didn't go that way baby it wasn't even close everyone teaches you about sucess but failure is something you learn on your own i'll never be as close as i was the night i turned you away i'll play, rewind and replay the night you faded away and i'll let it ring clear in my head Everynight i lay awake in bed questions and regret of the things i should have said i can't forget you i'll never forget you .... i miss you it hurts to say it i'm wrong, i was wrong in the end i think i was wrong all along but my pride kept me blinded i wanted to see you somewhere close to me somewhere in the future that thing the kids talk about, destiny but somewhere deep inside i know there's no element of care left in your eyes did you ever? i guess i'll never know and i'm left here thinking,remembering, reminising on how close, how close i came but how much further i had to go, the only thing bad about dreams is sometimes you have to let go i'll never be as close as i was the night i turned you away i'll play, rewind and replay the night you faded away and i'll let it ring clear in my head Everynight i lay awake in bed questions and regret of the things i should have said i can't forget you i'll never forget you .... i miss you She's been long gone now, she's dancing and laughing with someother right now, but that's my dream, she's long gone now my dreams living it up with someother lucky guy and for some reason baby i remain bitter sour and green with jealousy your all that i wanted but... but it's not how they teach you in school i stood as high as i could, took jumps and backflips for you but not all is fair in love and war sometimes the winner doesnt get the prize sometimes a priest lies sometimes a hero dies sometimes... but not all the time i'll never be as close as i was the night i turned you away i'll play, rewind and replay the night you faded away and i'll let it ring clear in my head Everynight i lay awake in bed questions and regret of the things i should have said i can't forget you i'll never forget you .... i miss you no no no no no nooo....... i''ll never be as close as i was(never that close) the night i turned you away i'll play, rewind and replay (play rewind replay) the night you faded away and i'll let it ring clear in my head (ring it clear) Everynight i lay awake in bed questions and regret of the things i should have said(no no no...) i can't forget you (can't forget) i won't forget you (won't forget) i'll never forget you (never forget) .... i miss you i miss you i miss you.... i miss you..... you left me tainted with your scent and your soul i was trying so hard to catch you but i couldn't get a hold your like the river baby your as free as anything if anyone hold you down they'll be the luckiest man alive But it wasn't me... But i'll dream it's me tonight...... |
To tell you the truth, I really don't like most lyrics posted on Elite, but yours were actually pretty good compared to most. Thought I don't think it was structured very well, most of it seemed to flow pretty good. Also, I very much enjoyed how you expressed each and every emotion, they were all balanced out and you didn't end up repeating yourself. The only nitpick I have about this piece is : "YOUR" so far, so far and out of reach" it should be "you're" , or "you are" if you'd wanna write it out. Other than that, great piece! ~Kriss | Posted on 2007-12-12 00:00:00 | by juss_kriss | [ Reply to This ] | |