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    dots Submission Name: Journeydots
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    Author: Inkybro
    ASL Info:    17/M/Oklahoma
    Elite Ratio:    3.33 - 55/69/39
    Words: 128
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 111
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 866



    Description:
       Wrote this while inspired by my newfound fascination with Native Americans.


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    dotsJourneydots
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    A feather is falling
    Through skies of red
    The sun is now setting
    The day is now dead
    On cliff-edge I sit
    Wittling all this wood
    Thinking of the music
    I've yet to let loose
    Behind me a bear comes
    And stops in his tracks
    He sits down beside me
    And grunts and he laughs
    My hand pats his shoulder
    Broad; covered in hair
    He comes in, now, closer
    And speaks what we share
    "This nature, this life,
    This death, this strife,
    This land, the womb,
    These trees, the tomb"
    He stands up beside me
    And points to the sun
    "See, when we get that,
    That's when we've won"
    And with that he turns
    And walks far away
    And I sit here bewildered
    Without a thing to say




    Submitted on 2007-12-10 10:19:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Nature is wiser than we humans who do not appreciate its beauty or do enough to conserve its resources for the generations to come. It's amazing what you can hear when you're quiet and still in a forest or on a mountainside.

    Yes, I do really like this poem. It's going in my favs.

    One spelling change: Whittling for line 6

    :-) Sharon
    | Posted on 2007-12-10 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]



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